Here is my elevator pitch!
https://youtu.be/5ZQ8CH1LAS0
I was not able to do the first two elevator pitches but I did work on it with my friend and he told me how to fix the first couple of drafts. I needed to add more information about the product, how is mine different, and why students need this.
He said that I needed to relax and to be more energetic about my product, show that I really like this and I am passionate about it.
I did add more information about my product. I want them to understand that my goal is to help students out by making it cheaper as well as making it more accessible and organized.
I feel that I was a little but more relaxed but definitely something I should continue to work on. I seemed energetic but I need to smile more.
I like your elevator pitch a lot. You've laid out your desires for your product and how you intend to sell it very well. I appreciate your straightforward request at the end and how you've explained what you're going to do with it. My advice is to find a way to make your pitch feel more natural. You want it to feel like a thread in a conversation. If you feel relaxed, then the people listening to your pitch feel relaxed too.
ReplyDeleteKayla,
ReplyDeleteI think that you have a great idea that could help most students across the country. Your pitch was very good for it being your first one. Your idea came across very clear and I understood exactly what your future business was going to do. You said that your friend said that you needed to be more energetic about the product, and I think you had great enthusiasm throughout your speech. Good job.
Hi Kayla,
ReplyDeleteI do think your idea is new and novel! Also I believe it has the potential to work although many many people are going to want to see you fail. In reality I believe the big publishers want us to find a hard time finding text books so we can purchase it directly from them or another retailer for a higher price.